Thank you, Meg David Honig August 20, 2010 FCG, Features 10 Comments Meg Houston Maker, our executive editor, has stepped down from her position to accept her dream job with Bonny Doon Vineyard. Meg will become their direct to consumer marketing manager, and if she is half as good at that as she has been for us (and I have no doubt she will be) a bottle of Le Cigare Volant will be on every table in America this Thanksgiving. In her time with Palate Press: The online wine magazine, Meg was a writer and our executive editor. She wrote our very first Feature Story, The Upside of Doon, a review of Randall Grahm’s new book, Been Doon So Long: A Randall Grahm Vinthology. In a way, we could say Meg’s career with Palate Press has truly come full circle. Meg also wrote a two-part story, A Trip to the Rhône, one of the best-written, and best-received, stories we ever had the honor to run. When W.R. Tish stepped down as executive editor after fulfilling his promise to help get Palate Press off the ground, he and I considered only one person for the job: Meg. To tell the truth, I’m not sure what we’d have done had she said no. It might have been the premature end to our little experiment in the next generation of wine journalism. But she said yes, and I couldn’t have been happier. In the eight months since Meg took over as executive editor, she has done a marvelous job keeping the magazine going, recruiting talented amateur and professional writers and editing content. Her most important contribution, though, and the one that will remain as her mark upon our publication, was her vision for Palate Press. Meg saw the big picture, not just day to day publishing details. She saw a magazine that could identify and develop great new writers while giving established ones a new outlet. She saw a magazine that could focus on new trends, like natural and organic wine; on small producers; on wine and food pairings; and on up and coming wine regions that don’t get the attention they deserve. We are better for Meg’s work, and will miss her as executive editor. But we will welcome back her voice as a writer for Palate Press. Being released from the demands at the top of the masthead, Meg will be free to once again share her tremendous writing talent with our readers, and we will all be richer for it. Meg, we wish you the very best of luck. We hope that in some small part your experience leading Palate Press: The online wine magazine helped prepare you for your work with Bonny Doon Vineyard. I raise a glass to you in thanks, and with best wishes for the future. We look forward to seeing your byline again in these pages. Finally, with Meg’s permission, I leave you with her rules of writing—rules she applied as executive editor, and rules that will continue to guide us in every story we publish: Twenty-four Theses We taste with four of our five senses: sight, smell, taste, and touch. (We don’t use our ears to taste, but you may have noticed that noise is antithetical to tasting. You cannot taste Burgundy in a noisy bar.) Our job as writers is to interpret the signals entering our sensorium and to apply language to make our experience understandable to others. I call this ability to translate taste into words “taste literacy.” There are really only two things you need to know to improve your writing. The first is to read, and the second is to write—and to pay attention while you do. Still, here are a few other maxims to keep in mind. 1. Writing is thinking, and thinking is hard. 2. Write for the reader, not for yourself. 3. Assume limitless intelligence but no prior knowledge. 4. Tell a story nobody else can tell. 5. Position yourself in the narrative. How do you know what you know? Show the reader. 6. If you write on behalf of a business, remember that organizations don’t talk; people talk. You are the person who gives the product a voice. 7. Find your lede. If you pose a question at the top, answer it by the end. If you find yourself pursuing other questions as you write, perhaps your lede is wrong. 8. You may not know what you think at the start of a piece, but you’d better know by the end. 9. Eliminate throat-clearing, needless disclaimers, excessive modifiers. Get to the point. Condense your prose. 10. The stronger your position, the more sober your prose. 11. Exclamation points should be reserved for exclamatory remarks. 12. Writing is therapeutic, but it is not therapy. 13. If you don’t know something, you may need to find it out. Also, you may have an opinion about these facts; this is welcome to your readers. 14. Through-action is the essence of drama. Who, or what, is your protagonist? And what’s afflicting him? Help him battle his way to the point. Dispatching aggressors is the stuff of compelling narrative. 15. Put everything about a subject in one place. And, add texture to your prose. 16. Generate questions in your reader’s mind. If you can keep the reader asking Why?, the reader will keep reading. 17. Don’t assume your experience is the same as your reader’s. Don’t resort to clichés. Nobody’s interested in reading clichés. 18. Be ruthlessly authentic about your own experience. Don’t over-rely on metaphor, especially sexual metaphor. Wine is an experiential product, so find, focus on, and talk about your own true experience in your most authentic voice. This is the story only you can tell. 19. Your voice comprises your vocabulary, tone, syntax, attitudes, and opinions. Each article has a voice, your site has a voice, even a collaborative publication has a voice. And if you’re doing things right, your voice will evolve. 20. Re-read your work the next day, then publish. If you proof instantly, you’ll still be in love with the person you were when you wrote it. 21. Learn to work with an editor. A good editor is on your side, trying to coax out your best story. 22. You need a good ending, but not a clever ending. Don’t trick your reader at the end; they will never forgive you. 23. The end will change the beginning. This is why you cannot write a story in only one pass. 24. If you succeed at this, and if you tell the truth—your own truth—you will have achieved one of the most intimate and beautiful of acts: you will have penetrated another mind. If you like this story, you might also be interested in: The Upside of Doon A Trip to the Rhône 2006 Bonny Doon Vineyard Le Cigare Volant Pingback: Tweets that mention Thank you, Meg : PALATE PRESS -- Topsy.com() http://www.palatetopen.com Jenious Meg, Congrats on your new position! I hope we may work together again in the future. Until then, best of luck, my dear. It was a pleasure having you as an editor. Cheers! http://www.makerstable.com Meg Houston Maker Thanks, Jenious. It has been a pleasure working with such a talented food writer. And I’m sure we’ll work together again! Cheers, Meg http://love-that-languedoc.com Ryan O’Connell Congratulations. I’m glad I got to work with you a little bit before your departure! You’re going to have such a blast working with Grahm. ;D http://www.makerstable.com Meg Houston Maker Thanks, Ryan. It was a joy to work with you, too. Keep it up! You’re an excellent writer, with things to say. Cheers! Meg http://www.simplehedonisms.com William Allen congrats Meg – I just got wind of this yesterday. Ironically I just finished reading Been Doon So Long, and am visiting Barbara at the winery on Monday. Not sure if you plan to move, or just travel, but don’t be a stranger now that in you are in the Bay Area, come to North Sonoma some day for dinner in Healdsburg and/or one of my monthly Sonoma Wine Meetups. Cheers and kudos! http://www.vtwinemedia.com Todd Trzaskos – VT Wine Media Congrats Meg! I’d heard this through the local grapevine, and was waiting for the official news. I have no doubt you are up the the challenge, and that you will have great fun exceeding it. Randall may be due congratulations for bringing you into the Doon team. Cheers! http://www.drycreekvineyard.com Bill Smart Meg, this is awesome news and I am so happy for you. You are such a supportive, caring person. I truly appreciate all your help and advice. Bonny Doon is one lucky winery. I hope our paths cross soon. Cheers to you! http://www.makerstable.com Meg Houston Maker William, thanks so much for your kind words. I will be working from home on the east coast, but traveling to Santa Cruz often, so I will be sure to look you up very soon. Have fun today at the winery, and say hello to Barbara for me. Cheers! http://www.makerstable.com Meg Houston Maker Todd and Bill, you both for the extremely kind comments. I have a big job ahead of me, and I’m really excited but nervous, too. It’s so gratifying to have the support of the community under me. Thank you.